ONE SHOT: A young Hispanic girl flies a kite at the BEACH. TILT UP to the kite in the sky (CGI). TILT DOWN to reveal the environment has changed to a PLAYGROUND, where a boy controls an RC airplane. TILT UP to the RC plane (CGI) soaring between buildings. TILT DOWN to reveal a CITY STREET, where an African American girl controls an iPad. TILT UP and zoom past the buildings into outer space to the ISS. Clever visual effects entice all kinds of students to participate. Boards/treatment attached.
If you're ok with spheres being more symbolic, I can replace the kite with a sphere on the end of the string (keep kite streamers?) and a sphere instead of a plane (keep wings and tail?). This would be metaphorical and no more confusing than spheres in other submissions (floating down street etc.).
Kathy Jones
07/20/2012
I like the idea of the smooth transitions from the beach to the playground to an urban environment. I also really appreciate the multicultural aspect. BUT its too bad they never included the SPHERES in the pitch.
