Perfect! What a great opportunity to demonstrate a helping hand, rather than a handout.This is a valuable life lesson, you are inspiring a generation of 'solutionaires' to go out there and change the world. I'm a teacher too and once I have a class of my own, I will be doing the exact same thing!
Wow! Gutsy, intelligent. Will appeal to those who want to make a difference - and they're the ones whose attention we want, right? Might lose some in the speed and verbage of the message - less here might be more.